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Week 7, Discussion 1

Week 7, Discussion 1

Q Coherence in writing is the flow from one idea to the next. Let's practice recognizing four types of coherence in our writing: • Transitional words and phrases Internet users do not always think about how their internet data is being used. Nonetheless, collecting and using data about search habits is big business. • Repetition of key words and phrases Companies are able to track the searches made by various demographics and use data about these searches to target advertisements to likely customers. Customers will see advertisements that match their interests, but they have to give up some privacy in return. • Pronoun reference For some customers, this loss of privacy is acceptable, while others are deeply concerned. • Parallelism Customers may worry about their search data getting into the wrong hands or about further intrusion into their private lives. Initial post (by 11:59 p.m. on Friday, December 2nd): Select one paragraph of your research paper to post and examine for examples of the above four coherence tools. Bold or underline the area(s) in your paragraph where you have incorporated one or more of the following elements of coherence in your writing: 1. Transition words or phrases 2. Repetition of key words or phrases 3. Pronoun reference 4. Parallelism Peer Response (first peer response due by 11:59 p.m. on Sunday, December 4th; second peer response due by 11:59 p.m. on Tuesday, December 6th): Choose a paragraph posted by one of your peers and respond to their use of coherence tools. Mention any ideas you have for improved coherence in the paragraph.

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